[Brokenfang~}

[Panic]

Name: Brokenfang
Age: 43 moons
Gender: Tom (Male)
Clan: ShadowClan
Desired Position: Warrior
Appearance:

Brokenfang is a large muscular tom. His pelt is short and mostly black. One paw is white as well as half of his face. His eyes are a deep green color. All along his pelt, and a bit on his face, are scars showing his senior warriorship. He tends to look a bit scary to kits for some reason beyond his knowledge. (I wonder...)

Personality:

Brokenfang is a very dark cat. He likes to keep to himself except if he's ordered to go hunting or on a patrol with other cats. He can usually be very emotionless, following any given orders. He'll do anything to defend his leader's words, and the entire clan.

History:

Brokenfang was born into a litter of 3, two toms and one she-kit. His sister, Birchkit, later died of white cough. All that was left was Brokenkit and Hawkkit. Brokenkit looked similar to his mother, all black although his mother had no white spots. Whereas Hawkkit was the spitting image of his father, Hawktail.

Of course, Hawktail had named Hawkkit after himself. To the other cats in the clan, Hawktail was a selfish, pompous, ambitious tom. Young Brokenkit didn't know that. He always looked up to his father, seeing him as a trustworthy, strong and handsome cat. Brokenkit wished to be just like him.

Each day Brokenkit would work hard to gain his father's recognition. His mother, Dawnflower, was very proud of her son. When he was apprenticed with his brother, he was a bit disappointed that Hawkpaw was mentored by Hawktail.

Brokenpaw still worked harder than ever. He practiced his hunting and fighting skills each day. However, Hawktail ignored Brokenpaw's efforts. Instead he cast all his attention on his great son, Hawkpaw. Hawkpaw basked in the constant praise. He grew lazy, often not even awaking until sunhigh. The other warriors, and even apprentices, scolded Hawkpaw for his actions. But Hawktail just yowled at them until they walked away.

Brokenpaw grew older and stronger, and Hawkpaw grew older and lazier. Soon came the time for their warrior ceremonies. But Hawktail couldn't wait. He asked Brokenpaw to join him and Hawkpaw in taking over the clan.

Brokenpaw no longer looked up to his father. He abandoned the idea of proving himself to him. The young tom had grown nothing but hatred for his father and brother. Of course, he denied. Out of outrage Hawktail attacked Brokenpaw.

The two fought hard, tumbling around on the ground. Brokenpaw ran at his father, knocking him over into the Thunderpath. Hawkpaw ran after Hawktail as Brokenpaw realized what he'd done. "No!" He yowled, but it was far too late. A large shiny monster drove by and the only thing left, was two identical lumps of bloody fur.

Practice Post:

Short Description:

Large, muscular, black tom with one white paw, half a white face, and green eyes.

Other:

[[Nightwood]]

I feel sort of sorry for him now. Very interesting history he has. Accepted.