Post by leopardfur on Jul 18, 2007 13:39:40 GMT -5
Name:Cloudspots
Previous Names:Cloudkit, Cloudpaw
Gender:Tom
Age:24 moons
Rank:Warrior
Appearance:Cloudspots does not look like a white cat, as you may have expected from his name CLOUDspots. He is named Cloudspots for the white fur on his jet black body, a white chest, white muzzle, and four white paws. His eyes are a dark amber, making the black that covers his head all the way to his maw look like he has no eyes at all. Long white whiskers and a long black tail, Cloudspots is a strong and well-built warrior, he may look small in size but he has a lot of muscle to back it up. Powerful hind paws and short fur make him a great runner, not as good as the WindClan cats, but nonetheless an exceptional running cat.
Personality:Cloudspots does have a temper, but he does keep it under control, he is smart and strong and a bit cocky at times but in the end he is a reliable warrior. Much like the Cloudtail of old, he thinks that outlaws should be punished, yet he does not carry the same rule that kittypets can be warriors, the only time he believed that was with Firestar. Cloudspots is gentle with kits and loves to play with them, but when there are serious moments dealing with the clan he listens and follows orders obediently.
History:Cloudspots was born of a normal family in the clan, Thornwhisker and Whitefeather where his parents, proud and loving they were and they both lived to see the day when Cloudspots was made a warrior. Of course, Cloudspots' father had mentored him and had trained him to be the best he could be. A battle with RiverClan had resulted in many casualties, and in the end Cloudspots' mother was killed, by accident of course. Thornwhisker was so shaken by this blow that he started to act without thinking, and only the soft calming words of his only son could snap him back into reality.
Later, a fight with ShadowClan over boundries had resulted in the murdering of Thornwhisker, but Cloudspots refused to be shaken. He was sad, as expected, but he knew that his parents were good warriors and that one day he would see them in StarClan one day.
After the fall of his parents, Cloudspots became more determined to fight and protect his clan like a warrior of TigerClan. He defended boundries and fought in battles like no other, and eventually he became well recognized in the other clans. Cloudspots had no love, and till this day still has no mate, but he knows that it's okay, that one day he might or he might not.
Other:Cloudspots loved and respected his mother and father, as did he the other clan cats, but eventually he set aside feelings for the good of the clan, not knowing when he should take those feelings back.
Mentor: Thornwhisker
Apprentice: Cedarfang(Both in StarClan)
Practice Post:The training hollow was bustling with activity as a couple of apprentices trained with their mentors. Cloudspots was busy with his apprentice, Cedarpaw but knew that he shouldn't be critisizing her attacks, for today was the day she became a warrior.
"Cloudspots," Cedarpaw suddenly said, as Cloudspots was heading in for an attack. Stopping right before he reached her, he sat down, wondering what this discussion was to be about.
"Yes, Cedarpaw?" He asked in a gentle manor, knowing that he could not yell at the one he had trained for so many moons.
"When do you think ShadowClan will attack again, you know it's a matter of time," she asked as her green eyes gazed up at him.
Cloudspots knew that yelling was wrong, even if it was a stupid question his apprentice was asking, but he would yell if need be. "Soon, hopefully not right when you have your warrior ceremony," Cloudspots meowed with a smile as he stood and walked back to camp, his apprentice at his side.
Once in camp, Freezestar had assembled the cats and had summoned Cedarpaw to Highrock. Saying the words passed down from leader to leader, Freezestar made Cedarpaw a warrior, her new name Cedarfang.
"Cedarfang! Cedarfang!" Cloudspots had remembered cheering loudly right before he caught whif of ShadowClan cats...no wait, they were RiverClan!
What seemed to be the whole of RiverClan charged into the ThunderClan camp, and they all began attacked the warriors and apprentices. Cloudspot's fought bravely, fending off two RiverClan warriors with the help of his former apprentice, but then, when the whole battle seemed to turn tides in ThunderClan's favor and the Riverclan cats were retreating, he saw his apprentice across from him in the clearing being struck down by a massive tabby from RiverClan.
"Cedarfang!" He screamed, his head spinning as he too fell to the ground in sorrow, then Cloudspots lost concisnious.
Waking to the sound of a StarClan cat, he gazed up at the moon, to see his former apprentice, Cedarfang, staring at him with caring eyes, the stars in her pelt. I've should have been with you I'm sorry! He though as she swiped her tail across his mouth, gave him a gentle nudge and dissapeared.
Waking up, this time for real in the medicine cats den, Cloudspots gazed up at the ceiling, his heart aching. "StarClan have taken so much, but in the end they always give something back to us." That was when he heard the not seriously injured cats freting over a new kit.
"Stormkit!" They called, and then Cloudspots blanked out once more, only remembering the name Stormkit. 'StarClan must want me to think of the next life brought to us, not the ones we have lost...'